Descriptive Writing

Well done to Linda in 6L for this great piece of descriptive writing, based on World War Two. I really like how you have started to proof read your work and correct your spellings.Linda descriptive

 

One thought on “Descriptive Writing

  1. This is fantastic! I particularly like your use of onomatopoeia and “show me, don’t tell me” to bring the setting to life!

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