Well done to Linda in 6L for this great piece of descriptive writing, based on World War Two. I really like how you have started to proof read your work and correct your spellings.
Well done to Linda in 6L for this great piece of descriptive writing, based on World War Two. I really like how you have started to proof read your work and correct your spellings.
This is fantastic! I particularly like your use of onomatopoeia and “show me, don’t tell me” to bring the setting to life!